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Tuesday, August 19, 2025

Nancy's Mysterious Letter

Happy Drews-day and it's time to check the mail for Nancy's Mysterious Letter.


The OTs continue the trend of illustrating a scene from the book on the cover, while the RTs have started to move toward a collage effect showing Nancy with an item or two from the story.

For the OT, Nancy is once again practicing her shocked face as she reads the mysterious letter, and we have a nice snowy scene behind her.  I wonder if that's supposed to be the Drew house behind her, because I thought from reading the book that it has more of a porch.  Anyway, we have some very bright colors here, especially Nancy's definitely-not-natural blonde hair.

The RT cover is considerably darker, with the damaged mail behind Nancy in a smart pink skirt suit.  I guess Nancy missed the memo from Anne Shirley that redheads shouldn't wear pink, but it's still a stylish suit and I still like Nancy's 60s hair.

Let's take a look inside.


Case file:
Nancy, Bess, and George are just returning to Nancy's house from an overnight trip to Red Gate Farm and this time Nancy is driving a new maroon roadster.  The girls see Nancy's mailman, Mr. Ira Dixon, an elderly man who is soon to retire to raise guinea pigs; he is struggling in the cold November weather, so Nancy invites him inside for cocoa.  He gives Nancy a letter from England and leaves his mail pouch on the porch while he has his cocoa, and tells her about his half-brother Edgar who is pestering him to share a small inheritance.  When Ira goes back outside, the mail pouch has been stolen.  Nancy's neighbor, 5-year-old Tommy, saw a man in a yellow overcoat take it.

Nancy takes Ira to the post office to report the theft to the postmaster, Mr. Cutter, who is bombastic and prone to very tiresome lectures about the youth of today (which turns into a theme in this book, unfortunately).  Ira is suspended and Secret Service detectives are on the case.  Ira refuses to believe that Edgar might steal the mail, but of course he is Nancy's prime (only) suspect.  Later, Carson theorizes that the theft wasn't to make Ira look bad, but to attack the Drews; Carson has just been appointed a special state's attorney for a high-profile case.  Nancy says that there are lots of ways to attack Carson's reputation, but only one way to attack Ira's, so she still thinks the crime was aimed at Ira.

And then we start the football talk (ugh).  Ned comes over and invites Nancy to go to Emerson with his parents for The Big Game the following week, and while the men discuss football, Nancy finally gets to open the letter from England.  A London law firm is searching for Nancy Smith Drew, who has inherited a small fortune, and Nancy is the first one by that name that they've found.  She writes a letter back and says she's not the Nancy Drew for whom they are searching, but offers her services to find the heiress.

Nancy goes to visit Ira, who is ill after the shock of the theft but steadfastly refuses to believe that Edgar has anything to do with it.  Back at her house, Nancy and Bess's lunch is interrupted by Mrs. Sheets, who is hopping mad that her mail was stolen and insists that Nancy pay her the $10 that was in her stolen mail.  Nancy initially refuses and Mrs. Sheets says that "you Nancy Drews are all alike" so of course Nancy wants info on the other Nancy Drew, and that afternoon she goes to the bank to withdraw $10 (accidentally bumping into Mr. Cutter and receiving yet another lecture).  She gives the money to Mrs. Sheets and then finds out that her information on the other Nancy is 8 years out of date, but she knows that she worked as a governess for the Hutchinson family at that time.

George comes over for dinner that night and Nancy asks her if she knows anything about the Hutchinson family because George reads the society pages in the New York papers (really?  That seems like more of a Bess thing but whatever).  George remembers a small item and promises to find the article later.  The next day Nancy goes out shopping for new clothes to wear on the Emerson trip, and she finds a bit more information on the Hutchinsons in the paper so she writes a letter to them.  Mrs. Sheets shows up again, delivers another lecture, and informs Nancy that the missing mail turned up so she returns the $10 to Nancy by dropping it on the floor, right after she talked so much about how young people today are so rude.  Nancy informs Ira and Mr. Cutter that the mail was returned.

The next day the Nickersons come to pick Nancy up and they all drive to Emerson; they are supposedly in their mid-40s but have iron gray hair (Mr. Nickerson) or prematurely white hair (Mrs. Nickerson) and as someone in my mid-40s I am wondering at that description...perhaps my husband and I are behind the power curve when it comes to gray hair?  I only have a few.  But anyway, they drive to Emerson and everyone is going bananas for the big game, including Nancy's friend Helen Corning, who is apparently dating Buck Rodman (she's not engaged or married to Jim Archer in the OT books).  At the big game, Nancy happens to meet Marion Hutchinson, who is part of the New York family that she's been trying to contact, and then there's a whole lot more very boring football stuff.  Snore.

That evening, they all attend a Shakespearean play and Nancy sees Nancy Smith Drew's name listed as assistant director in the program.  She and Marion try to find NSD, but accidentally get locked in the building so they miss her.  The next day, Nancy asks for Mr. Nickerson's help with the mystery and they visit Edgar's boarding house.  The landlady says that Edgar just moved out, but he told her that he had just come into a fortune and was getting married.  She gives Nancy a big stack of mail that was left there for Edgar because he didn't leave a forwarding address; back outside, Nancy immediately gets hit by two boys sledding and the letters get damaged.  Nancy "happens" to read one or two of the open ones and discovers that Edgar has been running a Lonely Hearts Club scam.  She theorizes that Edgar is now trying to get Nancy Smith Drew to marry him so he can grab her inheritance.

Back at Emerson, heavy snow means that everyone has to stay an extra night, so Nancy suggests that the people staying in her hotel have a masquerade that night, making costumes from things found in the hotel (this whole scene is just kind of bizarre).  The next day, Nancy enlists Ned's help to find Nancy Smith Drew's boarding house and she overhears NSD and Edgar having a heated discussion (because of course her two cases are connected).  Edgar leaves and Nancy takes the opportunity to tell NSD about her inheritance and that Edgar is a con man.  NSD decides to ditch Edgar and go to England alone to collect her inheritance; Nancy and the Nickersons take her to a river steamboat and get her on her way.  Meanwhile, Edgar shows up at the steamer just as the Secret Service agents catch up to him and arrest him, but he gets away and dives into the river and is never seen again.  Very dramatic.  The Nickersons take Nancy back home to River Heights, where Ira is exonerated and free to enjoy his retirement and guinea pigs.

Notes:
This is the first book not written by Mildred Wirt Benson; it was written by Walter Karig and in my opinion it *feels* like it was written by a man.  First there is all the extended and technical talk about football (snore), and then at least four long and repetitive lectures delivered by Mr. Cutter and Mrs. Sheets about the proper behavior for young women (ugh).  Then there are long scenes of Nancy shopping for clothes to take to Emerson which kind of feel like they were added because the author was guessing girls would be interested in that (or, perhaps more likely, because those scenes were in the outline provided to the author by the Stratemeyer Syndicate).  Can you tell this is not my favorite book in the series?  Oh, and the football thing--Ned is not the star quarterback, he is second string, and yet he still has newspaper articles written about him and he basically wins the game for Emerson.  I don't do sportsball at all and even I know that the second string quarterback wouldn't be doing all that.

We do have some fun moments though, like Hannah threatening to swat Mrs. Sheets with a broom if she doesn't leave, George struggling to carve a roast duck, and of course my favorite the repeated mentions of Ira's post-retirement plan to raise guinea pigs.  That detail just makes me laugh every time.  It was also interesting to get some screen time with Ned's parents, James and Edith, who never figure much into the RT books that I remember.  Nancy acts like she hasn't met them in this book, though in The Clue in the Diary she goes to Ned's house and leaves a note for him with his mom so that's a continuity error.  One more thing I liked is that Nancy sends the letter to the law firm in England and there's a detailed description of how the letter will be sent via ship-to-shore post, which was particularly interesting to me.

The only non-white characters we have are "colored porters" at the bank and the hotel in Emerson; their parts are much smaller than the Black characters in earlier books, but at least here they're just mentioned as working at those places and they're not described as degenerates like in The Secret of the Old Clock or The Hidden Staircase.  During the masquerade scene, Nancy dresses as a "Hindu prince" and other characters dress in blackface so we still get some pretty terrible moments here.  Yow.

Nancy's Knockout Tally, OT Edition:
Nancy has managed to stay conscious for two books in a row, so the tally remains:
Blunt force trauma:  2
Near suffocation:  1

Nancy's Skills:
Mr. Nickerson lets Nancy drive his car.  Uh, dude, MY dad rarely lets me drive his car unless we're on a long road trip and switching out drivers, no way have I ever driven any cars belonging to my friends' parents!  But Nancy seems to be really tight with Mr. Nickerson, maybe Ned and his mom should be nervous about that.

Nancy Drew, Fashion Model:
Nancy wears a raccoon fur coat several times in the book.  She debates whether she should wear her lavender evening dress or a deep yellow one with a corsage of violets for her Emerson trip (she wants to match the school colors, purple and orange).  It's not really clear if she's choosing this evening dress to wear TO the football game?  She buys a felt hat in a deep rusty brown and accents it with burnt orange feathers and a fluff of violet down to show her Emerson school spirit, retaining the plain pheasant feathers to put back on the hat when she doesn't want to be Emersonian.  For the masquerade, Nancy fashions baggy pants out of a tablecloth and wears a turban, sash, and a short suit jacket for her Hindu prince costume.

Cooking with Hannah:

Hannah has made cocoa and fancy cakes when Ira stops in at the beginning of the book.  She makes soup, roast, and apple turnover for dinner one night; Nancy brings Ira soup that Hannah made while he's recuperating.  Hannah makes bouillon and toasted cheese sandwiches for the lunch that is interrupted by Mrs. Sheets.  She later makes roast ducks stuffed with apples that Nancy brought back from Red Gate Farm, and clear tomato soup (uhh, every tomato soup I've ever had was red?).

On to the RT!


Case file:  
The basic case in this one is the same as the OT, but sadly all mentions of guinea pigs are edited out.  Ira and Edgar's last name is changed from Dixon to Nixon; Nancy is titian again, and Bess has dimples (I don't know why, but I like that detail).  This time, Nancy's letter from England is stolen with the other mail, but Ira remembers one of the names on the envelope and Carson is able to track down the London law firm and get another copy of the letter sent.  Carson's client Mrs. Quigley regularly sends him cash in the mail even though he tells her not to, and that is part of the stolen mail.  The next day, Nancy talks to some of Ira's neighbors and they find the missing mail, which was blowing around the neighborhood after it fell out of Edgar's car and the neighbors are indignant that they had to clean up after him.

In this version, Nancy confers with Chief McGinnis several times, giving him a description of Edgar and partial license plate of his car (thank you Tommy).  Mrs. Sheets' name is changed to Mrs. Skeets, though her abrasive personality remains the same.  Carson's secretary Miss Hanson gets a small mention (still waiting for Chief McGinnis and Miss Hanson to show up in the OT books), and the family that Nancy Smith Drew works for as a governess is changed from Hutchinson to Wilson (and Marion to Marian). 

This time, Nancy, Bess, and George visit Edgar's former boarding house before they leave for Emerson, and this time Bess and George go along to Emerson for the football game and Helen isn't in the book at all.  They spend a lot of time trying to find out if Edgar has gotten a marriage license anywhere because Nancy decides pretty quickly that Edgar is trying to get Nancy Smith Drew to marry him so he can get her inheritance.  Mrs. Skeets shows up to tell Nancy the mail was returned to her and her neighbors, which is a bit of a plot hole since Nancy had found the damaged mail outside of Ira's house...unless it was returned to the post office and sent out again?  Hmm.

At Emerson, a man throws a rock at Nancy and Ned pulls her down so she doesn't get hit.  They keep trying to track down Nancy Smith Drew and/or Edgar, and by calling all the overseas airlines in New York Nancy finds out that they're planning to fly to London.  We still have all the boring football talk, but this time Ned is the starting quarterback (which makes more narrative sense); he gets tackled in the first half and collapses on the field, but he's able to come in at the last minute and kick the winning whatever.  That night, on the way to a dance, Nancy and Ned are almost run over by a red car (supposedly driven by one of Edgar's henchmen) and then two fake detectives try to lure Nancy away from the dance.  Where is Edgar getting all these henchmen??

Nancy goes to NSD's boarding house and finds that she's left a cryptic note of Shakespearean quotations, and then Nancy, Bess, and George decide to fly to New York in an attempt to intercept NSD and Edgar before they leave for London.  Nancy gets drugged by a woman at the River Heights airport (another Edgar hench...person), but they find NSD at Kennedy Airport just in time for Edgar to be arrested and confess to everything.  The whole mystery started when Mrs. Quigley joined Edgar's Lonely Hearts Club and blabbed about how she sent money to Carson in the mail, which is why Edgar was trying to steal the Drews' mail specifically.  He also got the letter from the London lawyers and then saw an article in the Emerson paper about NSD working with the university's drama club, which is when he decided to woo her for the money.  Nancy tells NSD to go to London on her own to claim her inheritance, and NSD has to leave us with yet another Shakespearean quote to close out the book.

Notes:
In this version, instead of Ira telling Nancy about his ne'er-do-well brother, it's Hannah who spills all the tea and seems to be up to date on all the hot gossip in River Heights.  This time it's mentioned that Edgar and Ira have the same mother but they're 30 years apart in age; the OT implies that they have the same father instead, which makes more sense just from a biological standpoint.  In both books, Ira's inheritance that Edgar wants to help himself to came to Ira from a relative on the side that Edgar isn't related to, so he has zero claim to that money, he just feels entitled to it because he stinks.

This book has the first mentions of Burt Eddleton and Dave Evans, Emerson students who turn into regular dates for George and Bess respectively; now we have three boys and three girls who will work on a lot of the mysteries from here on out.  Near the end of the book the plan is for the girls to stay overnight with Nancy's aunt Eloise in New York, which is the first mention of her as well.  Nancy talks to Aunt Eloise on the phone, but the book closes out at the airport in New York so we don't actually meet her.

Several things have been added to up the excitement level, with the various attempts to harm Nancy and the race to New York, but again I wonder where Edgar gets all these henchpeople.  In both versions, Nancy Smith Drew had been studying to be a Shakespearean actor, but only in the RT do we get several Shakespearean quotes from her.  As a child I found that part tiresome and pretentious and I have to say, my opinion of that has not changed now that I'm an adult.

Nancy's Knockout Tally, RT Edition:
Blunt force trauma:  3
Drugged:  1

Nancy's Skills:
She has zero compunction about making a zillion long-distance phone calls to track down the Wilson family and later calling all the airlines about Edgar and NSD's travel itinerary.  Okay, so that's not really a skill, except for her patience in making all those phone calls.  She is able to decode the Shakespearean quotations left by NSD at the boarding house when the quotes just confuse everyone else.

Nancy Drew, Fashion Model:

Nancy puts on a pale blue evening dress that Hannah has to hem before the Emerson trip; later Nancy trips on it in stocking feet so Hannah has to redo a seam to fix the damage.  Hannah deserves a raise.  Here's another instance when we have more discussion of Nancy's fashion choices in the OT than the RT.

Cooking with Hannah:
Hannah has cocoa and cookies ready for Ira and the girls at the beginning of the book.  She sends Ira a jar of homemade stew when Nancy visits him and I think Ira is sweet on Hannah, not that I blame him.  Hannah broils steak for dinner and Nancy makes a salad of cottage cheese and tomatoes (I like those things separately, but it doesn't sound appealing together).  Hannah makes fresh vegetable soup to send to Ira, and later makes mashed potatoes and roast beef for Nancy and Carson.  (Hannah, can I hire you?)  For another dinner, she serves chicken and lettuce sandwiches, cut fruit, and chocolate cake.  (Seriously, Hannah, I have a guest room all ready for you.)

Rating:
Two stars for both.  This is my least favorite ND book up to this point; the football stuff is seriously boring and takes up a lot of space in both versions.  The OT has SO many tiresome lectures in it, but at least that's offset with some amusing episodes (guinea pigs!); the RT has fewer lectures but also fewer amusing episodes.  Glad I'm done with this one.

Tuesday, August 12, 2025

The Clue in the Diary

Happy Drews-day, it's time to search for The Clue in the Diary!


Like last week's Red Gate Farm, this book only has one cover for both the OT and RT, but it does have *some* copies of the OT with a picture cover (so no dust jacket), which made searching for the OT a little more difficult in this case.  That is exactly why I have the book in the middle--based on the photos of the drawings on the end papers, I thought it might be an OT so I bought it, but it's still the RT.  Still, I like the picture covers without the yellow bar on the top so I'm okay with that.

We have an action-packed cover with Nancy chasing after a man fleeing a house fire, and you can see the titular diary falling in the very bottom left corner.  This artwork is by Bill Gillies (I don't have anything with the original Russell Tandy artwork) and I read somewhere that he used his wife as a model for Nancy.  Can't remember where I read that though as I've read through so many Nancy Drew-related things in the past few months.

Anyway, the covers are the same and the RT follows the OT pretty closely, let's take a look.


My OT book once belonged to Jean Hoover.  (I like seeing other people's names and sometimes dates in my vintage books--it's a piece of history for that particular book.)

Case file:
Nancy, Bess, and George are having a picnic after attending a carnival in Sandy Creek; they talk about a mother/daughter duo they met at the carnival and how they adopted them and paid for them to enjoy the carnival rides.  They pack up and continue the drive through the country, and when Nancy points at a particularly large estate, the house promptly explodes in a raging fire.  The girls immediately rush over there and honk the horn to attract more attention in case someone is trapped in the house.  There's a lot of chaos, Nancy gets separated from the other girls and she sees a man fleeing the scene; she also picks up a diary that was dropped at the back hedge.

Nancy heads back for her car and sees a young man get in and start driving the car off; she wonders if he's trying to steal it but he's just moving it out of the way of flying embers from the fire and that is how she meets Ned Nickerson, her main man for many many more books after this one.  Bess and George turn back up and they try to leave, but there's a massive traffic jam and a nervous driver runs into the back of Nancy's car.  Ned directs traffic to get the snarl ironed out, and then he gives Nancy directions to a garage in his home town of Mapleton and follows her there to make sure she doesn't break down on the way.  They hear a lot of speculation about the cause of the fire and Nancy finds out the house's owner, Felix Raybolt (Foxy Felix), is unpopular to say the least--he made his money by less that scrupulous business dealings and people are ready to believe he burned down his own house to collect the insurance money.

Once back at home, Nancy tries to read the diary but soon realizes most of it is in Swedish and she thinks, "I wish now that I had kept that Swedish maid,  She couldn't cook but she might have been able to read this for me."  No Nancy, we love Hannah.  Ned calls early the next morning and says he poked around the ruins and found a ring, so he brings it over to her that night and meets her dad (who is relieved it's not a diamond ring, ha!).  The next day, Nancy, Bess, and George go out to visit Honey and Mrs. Swenson, the two they "adopted" at the carnival; they're pretty much destitute because Mr. Swenson left to find work and they haven't heard from him for a week.  Nancy buys them groceries and they make a feast for dinner that night; she happens to see Ned on the way back to the Swenson cottage and just invites him to dinner at someone else's house.  Bit presumptuous there, Nancy.  She questions Mrs. Swenson and comes to the conclusion that she saw the missing Mr. Swenson fleeing the Raybolt mansion after the explosion as he was one of Foxy Felix's victims.

Carson is unable to locate Foxy Felix, but he does track down Mrs. Raybolt who seems surprised and upset at the news that her husband may have perished in the fire.  She's staying at the Maplecroft Inn because it's the closest to the estate, so Nancy, Bess, and George go there to see if they can meet Mrs. Raybolt.  They do talk to her and she's convinced that Felix is dead.  The girls then go to Mr. Weston's factory in Stanford since he's the nervous driver who damaged Nancy's car; he willingly pays the bill and says he should get himself a chauffeur.  Nancy spots Joe Swenson among the factory workers but can't catch him.  That night, the girls go to a country club dinner dance and Nancy wishes her new beau Ned was there.  A few days go by and the girls buy Honey a new outfit for her birthday and mail it to her.

They finally return to Stanford and find Joe Swenson during his lunch break.  Nancy speaks to him alone and is quickly convinced that Joe had nothing to do with the explosion and Foxy Felix's subsequent disappearance despite having a motive.  He tells her that if he had his diary (and money for a lawyer), he could prove his case in court that Felix cheated him, but Nancy doesn't tell him she has it yet, though she does offer Carson's services pro bono.  Nancy, Bess, and George meet Joe at the factory at the end of the workday but so do a couple of detectives, who arrest Joe for arson and take the girls in for questioning as well.  The four of them face a tribunal (that seems extreme) and they're starting to convince the tribunal of Joe's innocence when Mrs. Raybolt sweeps in and points the finger at Joe as being the last person Felix talked to even though Nancy can tell from her facial expression that she'd never seen Joe before and she was making up the accusations.  So Foxy Felix isn't the only shady member of the Raybolt family and Joe has to stay in jail.

The following night, Nancy decides to stake out the ruins of the Raybolt mansion with Bess and George, thinking Felix might return there.  Bess and George get tired and fall asleep, but Nancy keeps watch and confronts Felix when he shows up.  She screams to alert Bess and George, and Carson and Ned charge up the driveway at "the psychological moment" to nab Felix.  Our heroes take Felix to the Maplecroft Inn since it's so late at night, and the next day force him to go to the jail to exonerate Joe Swenson for arson (and murder, since Felix was presumed dead in the explosion but they never say murder).  Felix admits that the fire started because there was a gas leak in the house and he lit a cigar, but since that was an accident and there's no hard proof that Felix cheated all those people out of vast sums of money, he's not under arrest.  Nancy tells Carson that she has the diary, and other people start coming out of the woodwork saying that Felix had swindled them too.  Nancy goes back to the Maplecroft Inn to confront Felix and tells him that now she *does* have proof of his unscrupulous business dealings and she convinces him to repay everyone or else they'd bring a court case against him.  He writes out all the checks while his wife shrieks in the background; they move to a tiny house in California, can't make any friends, and are never heard from again.

Meanwhile, Nancy holds a "creditors party" at her house and passes out all the checks to the people Felix had swindled.  Joe Swenson not only retained his job at Mr. Weston's factory, he got a big promotion.  The Swensons gift Nancy, Bess, and George with new purses and Ned gets a new wallet; Nancy also gets the signet ring that Ned had found.

Notes:
So at the very beginning of the book, Nancy witnesses Joe Swenson literally fleeing from the scene of a possible crime but decides from a split-second look at his face that he's not guilty.  Two minutes later, she sees Ned hopping in her car and immediately thinks he's stealing it despite how nice he looks.  Come on, Nancy, if you're going to make snap judgments at least be consistent!  Ned is described as 18 or 19 (remember, in the OTs Nancy is 16), with dark slightly curly hair and "whimsical and friendly" eyes.  I remember liking Ned as a kid, so I'm interested to see what I think of him on this read-through.  He keeps turning up wherever Nancy is in this book which could edge into stalker behavior, but this is a kids' book.  Nancy likes him even if she doesn't want to show it; when Ned comes over the first time to give her the ring he found, she wheedles Hannah into serving cake and ice cream and asks her to put on a pretty apron and cap.  Bess, George, and even Carson tease Nancy about her new beau which is kinda cute.

Nancy had planned to ask a Swedish baker, Oscar Peterson, to translate the diary, but that never happens in this book.  Joe himself tells her what he had written down, and she uses the diary as leverage against Foxy Felix at the end of the book.  Nancy decides not to give the diary to the police because she thinks they're high-handed and that she can do the investigation better than they can; she even tries to get Joe away from the detectives when she knows they're out to arrest him, so she could have been arrested for obstruction.  Nancy does crime but never gets in trouble for it.  Also they have to face a tribunal right after Joe is arrested??  I know this is well before Miranda rights but Nancy knows that they can refuse to speak until they have a lawyer present AND the girls are all underage, they should not even be questioned without a parent there!

Near the end of the book, when the Raybolts are both staying at the inn, they're in suite 305.  That's the same number of the office that was mentioned over and over in The Secret of Red Gate Farm.  I'm on the lookout for more 305 references.

Nancy's Knockout Tally, OT Edition:
Nancy stays conscious for the whole book, so the cumulative tally remains:
Blunt force trauma:  2
Near suffocation:  1

Nancy Drew, Fashion Model:
Nancy is wearing a "sports frock" when the mansion explodes, so I am imagining a tennis skirt but that's probably not right for 1932.  Back at home, she wears a dressing robe and dainty black and gold slippers that she kicks off in glee after talking to Ned on the phone for the first time (aww cute).  When Ned comes over to the house the first time, she puts on a flowered crepe gown and heels so clearly she wants to look extra pretty.  While she's running around town, she wears a beret, and for the country club dance she dons a flame-colored chiffon gown with black slippers.  When it's rainy, she wears a red slicker and a "knock-about" hat and I need to look up what that means.

Cooking with Hannah:
Hannah packed the picnic that the girls eat at the beginning of the book but we don't get to find out specifics of what she made.  Hannah makes a cake at Nancy's request for cake and ice cream when Ned comes over.  Nancy spends a lot of time driving back and forth between River Heights, Mapleton, Sandy Creek (where the Swensons live), and Stanford so she eats at a lot of tearooms and inns instead of home cooking by Hannah.


The book on the left was given to Maxine by her parents, and sometime later came into the possession of Brenda and now it's mine.  The other one only has my name in it.

Case file/Notes:
Like Red Gate Farm, this RT follows the OT pretty closely, with some things a bit condensed and one subplot added.  At the start, Nancy speculates that Mrs. Swenson's letters from her husband might have been stolen, particularly if he was sending her money orders and he's been gone for a month.  Later, instead of going to a country club dance with Bess and George, she attends a dinner party with Ned and meets his fraternity brother Phil Roberts, whose father happens to be the Stanford postmaster.  She goes to talk to the postmaster the next day and devises a sting operation to see if a money order actually goes out or if it's stolen.  Sure enough, the money order clerk was stealing and had accomplices cashing the money orders in other towns.

In the RT, Carson has a client who was swindled by Foxy Felix, so he has a more vested interest in finding Felix so his client can sue.  When Ned brings Nancy the ring he found, it has a D in it, which they later learn is for Dahl, which was Joe's mother's maiden name (and also Mrs. Swenson's maiden name, which seems like a really weird detail to include and makes me think of a Gilmore Girls episode).  Joe is working at Mr. Weston's factory under the last name Dahl.  In this version, Nancy recognizes the language in the diary as Swedish because she had a Swedish schoolmate.  Hannah is the one who reminds Nancy of Oscar Peterson the Swedish baker, and in this version Nancy does have him translate the diary for her (after he infodumps about famous people who kept diaries in the past).  The clue in the diary is that Joe wrote about how Foxy Felix had a secret hiding place in his house, and that's why Nancy thinks Felix going to return to the ruins of the mansion.

Happily for Felix, the hiding place was in the cellar and thus not destroyed in the explosion, so when he returns to the mansion late at night he's able to open the safe and starts to burn papers until Nancy stops him.  She later hands those papers over to the police and in this version they do press charges against Felix.  The Raybolts in this book are in collusion to commit insurance fraud (OT Mrs. Raybolt thought Felix was actually dead, he was going to tell her later; RT Mrs. Raybolt was in on it from the jump) and Felix had intentionally rigged the explosion but had to detonate it sooner than he intended when Joe showed up for their appointment early.

Nancy's Knockout Tally, RT Edition:
She managed to stay conscious for two books in a row (way to go, Nancy!) so we're still at 3

Nancy's Skills:
In the OT, she practices piano and sews while she's waiting for the weather to clear so she can go back to Stanford to look for Joe.  In the RT, she's the one who devises the scheme to catch the thieves at the post office.

Nancy Drew, Fashion Model:
She still has her dressing robe and dainty black and gold slippers.  Nancy wears a flowered dress with high heels, and for the dinner party with Ned she dons a pale green chiffon dress with gold evening shoes and a white wrap.  The OT actually has more outfits described than this one, which I think is a first.

Cooking with Hannah:
Hannah makes blueberry muffins, and later makes tea that Nancy is too distracted to drink.

Nancy's Mysterious Souvenir:  
Nancy, Bess, and George all get purses, Ned gets a wallet, and Nancy gets the signet ring.

Rating:
Three and a half stars for both.  It's fine, just not my favorite, though now that Ned has arrived the main gang is all together.